【写了篇英语演讲稿参加比赛『只要把改好的再发一遍就行了』IAMCHINESEChineseisapeoplewithbrightnessanddiligence.I’mproudofbeingaChinese.Chinahasalonghistory.There’remanywondersinchinasuchastheGr

　　【写了篇英语演讲稿参加比赛

　　『只要把改好的再发一遍就行了』

　　IAMCHINESE

　　Chineseisapeoplewithbrightnessanddiligence.I’mproudofbeingaChinese.

　　Chinahasalonghistory.There’remanywondersinchinasuchastheGreatWall,thesummerpalace,TheMingTombs,theForbiddenCityansoon.Thousandsofforeignpeoplevisittochinaeveryyear.Now,2008BeijingOlympicsiscoming.MoreandmorepeopleallovertheworldknowChina.SoI’mproudofbeingaChinese.

　　Chinahaswonderfulculture,too.Forexample,Beijingoperaisoneofthemostcostlyculturetreasures.SomerolesinChineseliteraturesarefamoussuchasSunWukong,ZhuBajieandsoon.I‘mproudofbeingaChinese.

　　Chinahasnotonlywonderfulculture,butalsohasmanygreatpeople.Suchasthefamousinventer,ZhangHeng,andthemathematicianChenJingrunandsoon.Theymademuchachievement.

　　Ihaveblackeyes,blackhairandyellowskins.IamaChinese.IloveChina.Whateverhappen,IwillalwaysproudofbeingaChinese!

　　Thankyou.

　　其他在意思表达上或者语法上没有问题吗？