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  有人能帮我看看这个托福作文能得多少分么?Question:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.Usespecificreasonsandexamples

  有人能帮我看看这个托福作文能得多少分么?

  Question:

  Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

  Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.

  Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

  Somepeoplebelievethatinanyrelationshipbetweenalwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantthing.Inmyopinion,beinghonestistherightthing,butnotnecessary.

  Everyonehashissecretswhichshouldonlykeepbyhimself.Sometimeotherpeopledon'tknowthethingsthatthemanwhokeepasecretdon'twantotherpeopleknowandtheyasksomethingrelatedtoit,andthemanfacesuchadilemma.IfIwerehim,Iwon'ttellthetruthtothepeoplewhohasaskedme.Becausethisismyownthings,Ihavetherighttokeepitfromothers.What'smore,nottellingthetruthwon'tinfluenceanythingbetweenus,Ibelievethatifheismyrealfriendhewillunderstandmybehavioranddomyfavor.

  ThereisanothersituationthatIwon'ttellthetruthtoanotherpeopleifitwillhurthim.Asyouknow,afewofbeautifulliesarenecessarysometime.Forinstant,apersonwhowillattendaimportanttesttomorrowhassomethingnotgoodinhisfamily,andIwilldecidetellhimwhetherornot.Iwillsay"no".Thereasonisthatthingshadhappened,andhecan'tdoanythingaboutthat.IfItoldhim,notonlycanhedonothingexceptworriedbutalsohemayfailintotheexamtoalargeextant.Thisisnotwisdom.

  However,webelieveyoucantellaliewhenyouhavesomeimportantreasons.Whereasyoushouldtellthetruthformostthings,becausehonestisthefoundationtoanyrelationship.Ithinknoonewilllikeamanwhoalwaystelllies.Andthepeoplewhoalwaystelllieswillloseotherstrust.

  Aboveall,myviewisthatyoucantellalie,butshouldnotalways,onlyifyoumustdoit.

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2020-10-1922:05
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李良君

  同学,ETS作文评分很诡异,所以不知道能给你多少确切的分数,但是我觉得字数上有待提高,还有需要再补充一些语法变换和长难句,一些高级词汇有一定加分因素,还有是逻辑结构需要再清晰,举例再细致.你可以在小马过河上贴你的文章

2020-10-19 22:07:04
谷建华

  这篇作文的语法时态啊什么的有很多错误么?

2020-10-19 22:08:13
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