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  【英语短文改错,并修改请修改下列段落,并提供你改好的段落.Myhometownisaprettycity,sopeopletherearekindandpolite.Withcomingofspring,grassandtreesturngreen,andflowersgrewinmanycolors.Insummer,theseaunderth】

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  Myhometownisaprettycity,sopeopletherearekindandpolite.Withcomingofspring,grassandtreesturngreen,andflowersgrewinmanycolors.Insummer,theseaundertheblueskiesisevenmorebeautiful.Afterautumnarrives,thecitylooksasanoldmanwithleavesfallenfromthetrees.Inwinter,alotofwhitebirdscometomycityforfood.Icanwaitmorepatientlyabovetheseaforquitealongtime.Whiletheyfindfishcometothesurface,theyflydownimmediateandcatchthemwithoutdelay.Thatismycity,andIloveitsomuch.

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  Myhometownisaprettycity,so(so改成and,加the,前后无因果关系,名词前要定冠词the)peopletherearekindandpolite.With(the)comingofspring,grassandtreesturngreen,andflowersgrew(grew改成...

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