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　　短文改错：至少有10处错误.DearBill:I'mveryhappythatyouwillcometoBeijingthatwinter.DearBill:I'mveryhappythatyouwillcometoBeijingthatwinter.MyfamilyandIdobothwecantomakeyoufeelatthehome.Duringy

　　短文改错：至少有10处错误.DearBill:I'mveryhappythatyouwillcometoBeijingthatwinter.

　　DearBill:

　　I'mveryhappythatyouwillcometoBeijingthatwinter.MyfamilyandIdobothwecantomakeyoufeelatthehome.

　　DuringyourstayinBeijing,Iwillshowyouaroundsomefamoustouristattraction,suchastheGreatWall,BeijingCapitalMuseum,BeihaiPark.WewillalsospendsometimetourarounddowntownBeijing,whenyoucanseetherapidchangeofthecity.Anotherexcitedmomentwewillshareisgoingtothe2014NewYear'sConcert,whichcanhelpyouexperienceChineseculturebyapleasantway.

　　Ibelievedwewillhaveagoodtime.Lookingforfwardtoyourearlyvisit.

　　Yours,

　　LiHua

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　　DearBill(:改为,)

　　I'mveryhappythatyouwillcometoBeijing（that改为this）winter.MyfamilyandI(dobothwe不明所以,去掉)can（to去掉）makeyoufeelat（the去掉）home.

　　DuringyourstayinBeijing,Iwillshowyouaroundsomefamoustouristattraction(加s),suchastheGreatWall,BeijingCapitalMuseum（,改为and）BeihaiPark.Wewillalsospendsometimetour(加ing)arounddowntownBeijing,（when改为where）youcanseetherapidchange(加s)ofthecity.Another（excited改为exciting）momentwewillshareisgoingtothe2014NewYear'sConcert,whichcanhelpyouexperienceChineseculturebyapleasantway.

　　Ibelieve(去掉d)wewillhaveagoodtime.Looking（forfward改为forward）toyourearlyvisit.

　　Yours,

　　LiHua