来自吕文祥的问题
修改一篇初中水平的英语作文LonglongagoinChina,therewasayoungmancalledYangShi.Oneday,hewenttovisithisteacherChengYi.ButChengYiwassleeping.YangShiwasrespectingforhisteacher.SohehasbeenwritingforChengYi.By
修改一篇初中水平的英语作文
LonglongagoinChina,therewasayoungmancalledYangShi.Oneday,hewenttovisithisteacherChengYi.ButChengYiwassleeping.YangShiwasrespectingforhisteacher.SohehasbeenwritingforChengYi.BythetimeChengYiwokeup,thesnowhadalreadybeenthick.
叙述程门立雪的故事,60词左右
我是要修改上面这篇，是否有语法错误。
