刚写了一小段关于核能和新能源的短文(明天要交的作业),请帮我指出错误,我刚写的一小段关于核能的看法,请各位高人帮我指点下有哪些不足,如语法或词汇上的错误,Formypart,Idon'tapproveofov

　　刚写了一小段关于核能和新能源的短文(明天要交的作业),请帮我指出错误,

　　我刚写的一小段关于核能的看法,请各位高人帮我指点下有哪些不足,如语法或词汇上的错误,

　　Formypart,Idon'tapproveofover-dependenceonnuclearenergy

　　togenerateelectricity.

　　Aimportantreasonisthatveryunsafe.asyouknow,

　　Intheeventofanaccidenthappenedthatwouldbecatastrophicforthelocalcountryeventheworld.

　　butitdoesn'tmeanthatweshouldgiveupnuclearenergy.

　　Ithinkwecanusethenuclearenergywhileresearchanddevelopmenttheothersnewenergy,

　　forexample,WavePower,WindPowerandlightning,

　　Weknowthat'sallwithoutdetrimentaleffectstotheenvironmentandrenewable.