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　　帮我看看有没有语病!有的话指出来,马上要!能帮我提点意见也行,感激不尽啊!好的话我加分,MypetMypetisalovelycat.Ilikeitverymuch.It'sverybeautiful.Lovelycatwithtwosmallears,looksliketiangle.Itwithtwo

　　帮我看看有没有语病!有的话指出来,马上要!能帮我提点意见也行,感激不尽啊!好的话我加分,

　　Mypet

　　Mypetisalovelycat.Ilikeitverymuch.It'sverybeautiful.

　　Lovelycatwithtwosmallears,looksliketiangle.Itwithtwobiueeyes.Intheevening,willshine.Ithasmanywhitefeather.It;stailislongandthin.

　　Italways"MiaoMiao",looksverycute.Mysisterlikesitverymuch,sosisteralwaysplaywithit.

　　Oh.fergottotellyou.mypetnameisfeifei.

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2020-09-2013:37

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　　还是有一些常见的错误的.我帮你改了,你看看.

　　Mypet

　　Mypetisalovelycat.Ilikeitverymuch.It'sverybeautiful.

　　Mylovelycathastwosmallearswhichlookliketiangle(这个词我不认识呵）.Ithastwobiueeyes.Intheevening,theywillshine.Ithasmanywhitefeathers.Itstailislongandthin.

　　Italways"MiaoMiao",andlooksverycute.Mysisterlikesitverymuch,soshealwaysplayswithit.

　　Oh.forgettotellyou.mypet'snameisfeifei.

　　哪里不懂的可以问我

2020-09-20 13:40:43

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