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　　哪位大神帮我改改英语作文,我大二.TheTrafficJamNowerdays,moreandmordpeoplehavetheirowncars.Beyondallquestion,privatecarsbringaboutalotconvenience.Butdespitethegreatconvenienceitbringsabout,wefindthe

　　哪位大神帮我改改英语作文,我大二.

　　TheTrafficJam

　　Nowerdays,moreandmordpeoplehavetheirowncars.Beyondallquestion,privatecarsbringaboutalot

　　convenience.Butdespitethegreatconvenienceitbringsabout,wefindtheseriousproblemsitmakes,the

　　trafficjam.

　　Withmoreandmoreprivatecarsintheroads,thetrafficjamhasbecameainevitableproblem.Tomakethingsworse,alotofdriverswhodon'tobeythetrafficrulesmakethisproblemworse.Theyrun

　　theredlight,driveundertheinflunceofalcoholandsoforth.

　　Tosolvethisproblem,wecanencourgepeopletakepublictransportmeasandtakeseriouspunishmentforthosewhoviolatethetrafficarules.Inmyview,ifweallexertourslevesforthetrafficjam,thisproblemcanbeeasysolved.

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　　Shouldbe'Nowadays'alotsofpeoplearehavingtheirowncars.

　　Theword'but'shouldnotbethefirstword

　　exp.Butdespitethegreatconvenienceitbringsabout,wefindthe.

　　Maybemakeitlikethis,Beyondallthequestions,havingowncarsmightbemoreconvenientbutitdoescausesomeproblemstoo,suchastrafficcongestion.

　　Withtheincreasingnumberofcarsontheroad,trafficjamhasbecomeainevitableproblem.Tomakethingsworse,alotsofdriverwhodonotobeythetrafficrulessuchasrushingtotheredlight.

　　lolsorryIdontthinkIcananyofthisanymore.ThingsuptherewerewhatIcoulddo.