求英语高手帮忙修改我的英语演讲稿!大一水平HowdidyouenjoyyoursummerholidayGoodmorningeverybody!I’mXXXfromclass12.It'smyhonortospeakhere,andgiveyouaspeech.ThentodayI'dliketotalksomethingaboutmysummerh

　　求英语高手帮忙修改我的英语演讲稿!大一水平

　　Howdidyouenjoyyoursummerholiday

　　Goodmorningeverybody!I’mXXXfromclass12.It'smyhonortospeakhere,andgiveyouaspeech.ThentodayI'dliketotalksomethingaboutmysummerholiday.

　　IthinkI’maluckyguybecauseIdidnotgotoschoolsincemonth4,soIhadalongersummervacationthanotherguys.DuringthislongholidaythemostmeaningfulthingsIdidwasthatIhadajourney.Andthatalsowasmyfirstjourney.

　　TheplaceItravelednamedBeijingwhosehistoryandculturalareindeeddeep.Thisjourneylastedaweek.Wewenttothegreatwall,theforbiddencity,thesummerpalaceandtheimperialcollegeandotherplacesofhistoricinterestscenicbeautylikeanyvisitorsdid.Therearesomanybeautiesthatsurprisedme.Besidesenjoyedthebeautywealsoenjoyedthegourmetfood.WehadawonderfuldinnerinQuanjudewhoseBeijingroastduckisknownfarandwide.AndwealsoenjoyedothersignssnakeslikeCandiedHawinaStick.Ithinkthistraditionalfoodisdeliciousandattractive.

　　FromthisjourneyInotonlygainedknowledgeabouttheoldhistorybutalsolearnedmanytruthfromit.ForexamplewhenIclimbedthegreatwallIlearnedImustinsistonwhenIfaceddifficulties.Onlyinthiswaycanwesucceed.AndIalsolearnedit’sourresponsibilitytoprotectthehistoricalheritage.

　　Thisjourneynotonlyenrichsmyholidaybutalsoopenedmyeyes.

　　Finally,thankyouforyourlistening,that’sall.

　　大致意思就是介绍我的暑假,然后我希望有英语高手帮我修改一下,那些语法错误,中式英语都能改掉,尽量美式一点.还有就是希望能增加点高级英语单词,复合句,词组之类的,总之就是希望显得有内涵一点.时长控制在2分钟,可以适当的帮我删掉点或加几句.如果这里发不下,可以把修改好的演讲稿发到我的邮箱yaoyao588888@yahoo.cn