雅思大作文几个句子帮忙看看有没有问题,如果有更好的表达方法呈现就更好了!（求专业的看看）1Itisquietabsurdthatifanuniversityreceiveequalmaleandfemalestudentsineverysubjectfrommyperspective.2I

　　雅思大作文几个句子帮忙看看有没有问题,如果有更好的表达方法呈现就更好了!（求专业的看看）

　　1Itisquietabsurdthatifanuniversityreceiveequalmaleandfemalestudentsineverysubjectfrommyperspective.

　　2Inconclusion,itisunnecessaryforuniversitytoacceptequalnumberofmaleandfemalestudentsineverysubjectinthatitwiilplayatollinstudents'development,restrictthefreedomofstudentsandtriggerthesideeffectamongstudents.