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  帮我看看托福作文DoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatementTelevisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsandfamily.正文:Therecentyearshaveseentheprofoundchangesoftelevisionsystem,duringwhichagrowingnunbe

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  DoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatementTelevisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsandfamily.

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  Therecentyearshaveseentheprofoundchangesoftelevisionsystem,duringwhichagrowingnunberofpeopleconsiderthatthetelevisionhasdestroyedconnectionbetweenfriendsandfamily.Manwhile,stillsomedeemthatthereisnothingnegativeinflluenceaboutit.Isidewiththeformer.AsIseeit,Televisionisbadlytocommnunicationamongthepeoplearoundus.

  Televisionwillmakeagoodfriendchangeintoastranger.Also,thetelevisionissocharmingthatwecannotcontrolourselvestostoppingwatchingit..Ifwewatchittoomuchwithoutgoingoutwithourfriendstodosomeoutdooractivities,thefriendshipamongourfriendswillbecomingmuchworseandworse.Forexample,IpossessedagoodfriendinmyclassmanyyearsagowhowasveryfriendlytoothersbeforehehasaddicttotheTelevisionprogamme.Astimewentby,hebecamemoreandmoreinterstedinwatchingthetelevisioncausehedidn’tplaywithusanylonger.Sincethat,thechanceofourcommunicationandoutdooractivitieswaslessthanbeforecauseourfriendshipisstrangerandstranger.NowIdon’tseehimasmygoodfriendsbecauseofhisaddiction.

  Televisionnotonlydestroysourfriendshipsbutalsoourcommunicationamongourfamily.

  Televisioncausewenolongerspentenoughtimewithoutfamilyanddestroysthecommunication

  Withoutfamily.ifwespendtoomuchtimetothetelevision,thefamilywillalsobeinfluenced.apersonalexeperienceofmineisthat,3yearsago,Iownmynewhouseandfeltveryrelaxingatthatmoment,IcouldplayeverythingIlikedanddoeverythingIwant.Ialwayswatchedtelevisionfromafternoontillnightinsteadofcallingmyelderfamilymembertotalkwiththem,fromthenonIknewlessandlessaboutthemandevenbecameverystrange.ButsinceIknowIdidsomethingwrongandIrealizedthatIshouldtalktothemmoreoftentokeepfamilarwiththem.

  Thoughthetelevisionhasalargenumberofdisadvantages,Idon’tdenythatitisstillveryusefulandpayanimportantpartinourlives,suchas,catchingthenewsandenjoyingourselvesandsoon.Wemustjustuseitafterwehavedoneallofthemeaningfulevents.

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  在从句等长句的应用,文章的整体结构方面意识很好.但是细节,如单词的拼写,词组的使用方面稍有不足有待进步.如有心注重,假以时日,必有所成

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