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　　【麻烦修改这两篇英文日记,August23.2009SundaySunnyItisafinedaytoday.Afterthedinner,MymotherandIwalkedatxxroad.onthebridge,Isawalittlegirlclimedtheguardrail,andIsawaverylovelydog,ItwasverysmallIhaveeverse】

　　麻烦修改这两篇英文日记,

　　August23.2009SundaySunny

　　Itisafinedaytoday.

　　Afterthedinner,MymotherandIwalkedatxxroad.onthebridge,Isawalittlegirlclimedtheguardrail,andIsawaverylovelydog,ItwasverysmallIhaveeverseen.

　　TodayImadealearningprogram,ImustimprovemyEnglish.

　　August24.2009MondaySunny

　　Afterwehadwalked,onthewayhome,Isawaoldmaninthesquare,Althoughhewasoverseventyyearsold,Hewasstillactive,Hedancedamongalargecrowdofyoungpeople,HelooksveryhealthIthough.

　　Ididn'tplaytheviolinafewdays,TomorrowIwillpracticeitanhour.

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　　August23.2009SundaySunny

　　Itisafinedaytoday.

　　Afterdinner,mymotherandIwalkedonxxroad.Onthebridge,Isawalittlegirlclimedtheguardrail,andIsawaverylovelydog.ItwasthesmallestdogIhaveeverseen.

　　TodayImadealearningprogram.ImustimprovemyEnglish.

　　August24.2009MondaySunny

　　Whenwewalkedonthewayhome,Isawaoldmaninthesquare.Althoughhewasoverseventyyearsold,hewasstillactive.Hedancedamongalargecrowdofyoungpeopleandhelookedveryhealthy.

　　Ihadn'tplaytheviolinforafewdays,sotomorrowIwillpracticeitforanhour.

　　注意一些大小写,标点,连词,不适合的形容词等等.