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　　高手帮忙改英语作文Itisverynecessarytobeagooduniversitystudend.Gooduniversitystudentsisthefoundationoftheconstructionofthemotherland.Ifyoudidn'twanttobeagoodstudentyouwilllosethebestopportunitytostudy.Howt

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　　Itisverynecessarytobeagooduniversitystudend.Gooduniversitystudentsisthefoundationoftheconstructionofthemotherland.Ifyoudidn'twanttobeagoodstudentyouwilllosethebestopportunitytostudy.

　　Howtobeagooduniversitystudent?Thereareseveralprerequistestobeagooduniversitystudent:goodcharacter,studyhard,healthbody,etc.

　　WhatIwilldointhefutureisasfollows.I'llhelpanybody

　　whoneedhelp.I'llcherishthischancetostudy.Iplaybasketballtwiceaweek,soIdon'tworryaboutmyhealty.

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2020-09-0320:41

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何小贤

　　在你的基础上改一些错的地方,当然,在句子结构和样式多样上还需要下功夫.好的文章不是用的词多,而是用了恰当的词

　　Itisverynecessarytobeagooduniversitystudend（student).Gooduniversitystudentsis(are)thefoundationoftheconstructionofthemotherland.Ifyoudidn't(don't因为你讲的是一个客观的事,不是指过去）wanttobeagoodstudentyouwilllosethebestopportunitytostudy.

　　Howtobeagooduniversitystudent?Thereareseveralprerequistes（这个好像写错了吧,可以改为factors)tobeagooduniversitystudent:goodcharacter,studyhard(并列几个名词词组,可以用hardstudy）,health(healthy)body,etc.

　　WhatIwilldointhefutureisasfollows（following).I'llhelpanybody

　　whoneed(needs)help.I'llcherishthischanceto(of,珍惜学习的机会）study.I(will)playbasketballtwiceaweek,soIdon'tworryaboutmyhealty（health).