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  请帮我改一篇高中英语作文,.Sheiswillingtohelpothers,andshehasapositiveattitudetowardseverything.Lastweek,shehelpedanoldmanwhoisseriouslyhurtinthelegonthewaytoschool.Worried,shesenthimtothehospital.Beforel

  请帮我改一篇高中英语作文,.Sheiswillingtohelpothers,andshehasapositiveattitudetowardseverything.Lastweek,shehelpedanoldmanwhoisseriouslyhurtinthelegonthewaytoschool.Worried,shesenthimtothehospital.Beforelong,theoldmanfeltbetterandthanksLiualotThereisnodoubtthatLIUdidarightthing.Asforme,IwoulddothesameifIhadbeeninthatsituation.Actually,someonewilltreatitastrpuble,becauseitisdifficultforthemtotrustastranger,evenifanoldman.AsfarasIamconcerned,itisourdutytohelpthosewhoareintrouble.Onlybythiswaycanwemakeourselvesbetterandbetter.

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2020-09-0307:14
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耿振鸿

  shehelpedanoldmanwhois改为was

  onthewaytoschool,the改成her,不然指代不明,是老人去学校还是she

  worried是担心的,形容词,不能直接开头.shewasworriedabouthim,soshe……

  themanfeltbetterandthanks(改为thanked)

  Iwoulddothesame(+thing)

  trouble拼错了

2020-09-03 07:15:30
盛明兰

  说起来不是有一种形容词作状语的句式吗

2020-09-03 07:19:48
耿振鸿

  恩,可以这么用的

  我给忘记了

2020-09-03 07:24:44
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