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　　主题：我心中的成功人士.要求：1.人物简介2.人物事迹3.对你的启示ThesuccessfulmaninmyheartWhoisthesuccessfulmaninmyheart?sureismyfriendFandy.Shiis14yearsold,andsheisgoodatstudy.Sheisaveryfriendly

　　主题：我心中的成功人士.要求：1.人物简介2.人物事迹3.对你的启示

　　Thesuccessfulmaninmyheart

　　Whoisthesuccessfulmaninmyheart?sureismyfriendFandy.Shiis14yearsold,andsheisgoodatstudy.Sheisaveryfriendlygirlwhowithalongblackhear,Sheusuallyhelpmewithsometroubleatmystudy.Whatagoodgirl!IthinkSheissuccessful.Shedoeverythingperfect!Iwilllearnfromher,tohelpothers,andtrytodomybest!Iwillstudyhardinordertocatchher!

　　(PS.知道自己写得很烂.不过很想知道哪里有错误,还有那些句子可以改的更好的!）

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　　Thesuccessfulmaninmyheart

　　Whoisthesuccessfulmaninmyheart?sureismyfriendFandy.A14yearsoldbeautifulgirlwithalongblackhearwhoisgoodatstudy.Whatismore,Sheisesaytogetalongwith,ItisshethatalwaysdoesmeafavorwheneverIamintrouble.Whatagoodgirl!sheismyangelinmylifeIthink.ThereisnodoubtthatSheissuccessful.ShealmostdoeseverythingperfectlyFandy.setsagoodexampleformeandIwilllearnfromher----trytodomybest,andtohelpothers,!Iwillstudyhardinordertocatchupwithher!

　　个人意见,水平有限,仅供参考,注意单复数,catchher是抓住她,应用catchupwithher