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　　【姐姐,在帮我修改下这篇考研小作文,受累Directions:ourlocalmuseumisadvertisingexhibitionthatyouareinterestedingoingtosee.writeanemailtothemanagerofthemuseum.Introduceyourself,andaskforanyrelevantinformation.D】

　　姐姐,在帮我修改下这篇考研小作文,受累

　　Directions:ourlocalmuseumisadvertisingexhibitionthatyouareinterestedingoingtosee.writeanemailtothemanagerofthemuseum.Introduceyourself,andaskforanyrelevantinformation.

　　DearSirorMadam,

　　Iamsogladtohearthatyourmuseumwillhaveanexhibitionnextweek.IamaseniorhistorymajorfromBeijngUniversity.Ihaveaparticularinterestinhistorysincechildhood.Therefore,Iwouldliketoaskyousomerelevantinformationsabouttheactivity.

　　Firstofall,couldyoutellmethespecifictimeaboutthisactivity?BecauseIhaveclassesfromMondaytoFriday.Ifyoutellmetherelevanttime,Icanmakeanecessaryarrangementinadvance.Inaddition,IwondertheactivitymainlyfocusonwhichDynastyexhibitioninChinesehistory.Lastly,Isthereanypreferentialpoliciesforstudents?

　　Ilookforwardtoyourfavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.

　　Yourssincerely,

　　LiMing

　　这是一篇模拟题,另外可能这个月会麻烦您次数多些,从下个月开始我打算背几个月大作文,受累!

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　　DearSirorMadam,

　　Iamsogladtohearthatyourmuseumwillhaveanexhibitionnextweek.IamaseniorhistorymajorfromBeijngUniversity.Ihavehadaparticularinterestinhistorysinceiwasachild.Therefore,Iwouldliketoaskyouforsomerelevantinformationabouttheactivity.

　　Firstofall,couldyoutellmethespecifictimeaboutthisactivity?BecauseIhaveclassesfromMondaytoFriday.Ifyouarekindtogivemetheinformation,Icanmakeanecessaryarrangementinadvance.Inaddition,IwonderwhichDynastyinChinesehistorytheactivitymainlyfocuseson.Lastly,Isthereanypreferentialpoliciesforstudents?

　　Iamlookingforwardtoyourfavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.

　　Yourssincerely,

　　LiMing

　　这篇文章写得比前几篇要好,而且之前写作里出现的那些固定词组和句式你也能用上来了,有进步.另外,我周末一般不能上网,若我不能及时给你回复,你可以参考别人给你的意见.