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　　帮我改下文章,看看有没有语法问题或加上什么Winterwasgone,springcomes.Myfavoriteseasonisspring.Springisthefristseasoninayear.Therearethreemonthsinspring:March,AprilandMay.Ilovespringbest,becauseit'sveryb

　　帮我改下文章,看看有没有语法问题或加上什么

　　Winterwasgone,springcomes.Myfavoriteseasonisspring.Springisthefristseasoninayear.Therearethreemonthsinspring:March,AprilandMay.Ilovespringbest,becauseit'sverybeautiful.Inspring,theweatherisawayssunnyandrainy,it'snotcoldandnothot,it'swarmerandwarmer.Theflowersbegintoopenandthetreesbegintoturngreen.Thebirdsaresinginginthesky,theyarehappy.Theanimalswillgoouttoplay.Manypeopleliketogooutandenjoythesunshine.Iliketoflykitesandtogohikingwithmyparents.Springiscolorfulandbeautiful.SoIlikespringverymuch.

　　Ilikethespring,thereforeIhopedthatthepeopleprotectthenature.

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2020-08-2416:13

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焦晓伟

　　Myfavoriteseasonisspringwhichcomesafterwinter.Springisthefirstseasoninayear.Thereare3monthsinspring:March,AprilandMay.Ilovespringbestbecauseit'sbeautiful.Inspring,itisalwayssunnyandrainy.Neitheritiscoldnorhotanditgrowswarmerandwarmer.Flowersbegintobloomandtreesstartsturninggreen.Birdsaresingingintheskyhappily.Animalsgoesouttoplay.Manypeopleliketogooutandenjoythesunshine.Iliketoflykitesandtogohikingwithmyparents.Springiscolorfulandbeautilandthat'swhyIlikeitverymuch.

　　楼主写得我不错,英语绝对比我初一的时候好.但最后春天怎么能保护环境扯一起了,这个好像不太好

2020-08-24 16:17:47

费为银

　　演讲稿嘛，不是得瞎扯，总得有个主要思想，要不太像作文

2020-08-24 16:22:15

焦晓伟

　　那最后一句话,稍微改一下比较好.Ibelievemanypeoplehavethesameideawithme:theylovespring,lovethenature.SoIhopeeveryonecantryhisbesttoprotectthenaturetokeepitbeautiful.

2020-08-24 16:23:37

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