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　　想请英语高人帮忙修改一下这个英文自我介绍考研复试用的~本人英语基础不好,特别是语法部分,英文自我介绍虽有很多模板参考,但自己填完还是觉得有不少地方怪别扭的因为有的部分是模板

　　想请英语高人帮忙修改一下这个英文自我介绍

　　考研复试用的~

　　本人英语基础不好,特别是语法部分,英文自我介绍虽有很多模板参考,但自己填完还是觉得有不少地方怪别扭的

　　因为有的部分是模板,所以我只把自己觉得别扭的地方点列下来.

　　1.IhavealreadypassedCET-6inJuly2010.InthepasthalfyearIhavebeenpreparingforthepostgraduateexaminationbyrentaroomwhichnearanuniversity.ActuallythisismysecondtimetotakepartintheexamforthedreamofSuzhouUniversity.

　　2.Lifeisprecious.Itisnecessarytoseizeanychanceforself-development,especiallywhenyourealizewhatisyourreallylike.

　　3.asanoldsayinggoes,actionsspeaklouderthanwords.Righthere,IonlywanttosayIamopen-mindedandveryfondofPsychology.

　　4.Ilikereadingbooks,especiallythoseaboutliteratureandgeography.Ofcourse,besidespsychology.

　　Inaddition,duringmycollegeyears,Ihadbeenthreeconsecutiveyearsoftabletennischampionofourcollege.TheprocessofcompetitionmakemehaveabettermentalitywhenIfacedifficultesandpressure,moreover,theprocessoftrainingmakememoreperseveringwhenIdeterminedtodosomething.

　　5.Iwillsparenoefforttomasteragoodcommandofadvance

　　AppliedPsychology.

　　还可以多加分的!

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　　1.IhavealreadypassedCET-6inJuly2010.SinceIdecidedtopursuemyfurtherstudyinthepasthalfyear,Ihadbeenpreparingforthepostgraduateexaminationbyrentingaroomnearyouruniversity.ActuallythisismysecondtimetotakepartintheexamformybigdreamofSuzhouUniversity.

　　2.Inmyopinion,Lifeisamixtureofchallengeandopportunity.So,Ithink,Itisnecessaryformetoseizeanychanceformyself-development,especiallywhenIknowwhatisIreallywant.

　　3.whenitcomestomypersonality,Righthere,I‘dliketocitemyfriends’evaluationforme.intheireyes,Iamopen-minded,friendlyandalwaysreadytohelyothersinneed.moreover,IamancrazyenthusiastforPsychology.So,sometimes,theythinkitisinterestingandinformativetochatPsychologyissureswithme!

　　4.Ilikereadingbooks,especiallythoseaboutliteratureandgeography.Ofcourse,psychologyisinclusive.

　　Inaddition,duringmycollegeyears,Ihadbeenthreeconsecutiveyearsoftabletennischampionofourcollege.TheprocessofcompetitionmakesmecultivateabettermentalitywhenIfacedifficultesandpressure,moreover,theprocessoftrainingmakesmebecomemoreperseveringthaneverbeforewhenIhaveafixedgoalinmymind.

　　5.Iwillsparenoeffortstomasteragoodcommandofadvance

　　AppliedPsychology.