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　　【麻烦英语高手帮我斧正一下这篇六级作文!ForthepastfewyearstherehavebeenmoreandmorestudentsignoredthestudyofChinese.Nowletusdiscusswhytheybecamelikethis.FirstofallwecanwatchmoreandmoreEnglishmoviesand】

　　麻烦英语高手帮我斧正一下这篇六级作文!

　　ForthepastfewyearstherehavebeenmoreandmorestudentsignoredthestudyofChinese.Nowletusdiscusswhytheybecamelikethis.FirstofallwecanwatchmoreandmoreEnglishmoviesandlistentomoreandmoreEnglishsongthoughInternetnow.TheserecreationsmakeEnglishbecomepopular.Secondly,ourcountry’seducationhavemadeEnglishbecomeveryimportanttothestudents.IfyouarenotgoodatEnglishyoucan’tgotoagoodcollege.Thelastbutnottheleast,therearealotofcompaniesinourcountrydoingbusinesswithforeigners,theyneedmanypeoplewhoknowEnglishwelltohelpthem.

　　Inmyopinion,thoughEnglishisveryusefultoday,weshouldnotignoreChinesestudybecauseitisourmothertongue.ItkeepusrememberingwhoIam.TherewillbeonedaythatChinesebecomemoreusefulthanEnglishandtheforeignershavetolearnChinesewelltodobusinesswithus.

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　　ForthepastfewyearstherehavebeenmoreandmorestudentsignoredthestudyofChinese.Nowletusdiscusswhytheybecamelikethis.FirstofallwecanwatchmoreandmoreEnglishmoviesandlistentomoreandmoreEnglishsong(s)thoughInternet(which)makeEnglishbecomepopular.Secondly,theeducationofourcountrymadeEnglishbecomeveryimportanttothestudents.IfyouarenotgoodatEnglishyoucan’tgotoagoodcollege.Thelastbutnottheleast,therearealotofcompaniesinourcountrydealwithforeignerbusinessafairs,theyneedmanypeoplewhoknowEnglishwelltoworkforthem.

　　Inmyopinion,though,Englishisveryusefultoday,weshouldnotignoreChinesestudybecauseitisourmothertongue.Itkeep(s)usrememberwhoIam.InthenearfuturethatChinesebecomewillbemoreusefulthanEnglishandtheforeignershavetolearnChinesewellinordertodobusinesswithus.

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