求高手改一下我刚写的一篇2009年6月的英语六级作文,09年6月的六级作文题是:1有人认为名字很重要2也有人认为无关紧要,3我认为TheInprotanceOfanameInrecentyears,thetopicoftheinport
求高手改一下我刚写的一篇2009年6月的英语六级作文,
09年6月的六级作文题是:
1有人认为名字很重要
2也有人认为无关紧要,
3我认为
TheInprotanceOfaname
Inrecentyears,thetopicoftheinportanceofanamehasarousedpervasiveattention.Asweallknow,somepeopleeventurntoperfassionalconsultforagoodname.Whilewiththepassageoftime,defferentvoicesriseoverwhethershouldnamedivideintogoodorbad?
Somepeopleholdtheopinionthatagoodnamedeserveseverything.Forthem,agoodnamenotonlyinfluencetheiremotion,butalsomayleadtosomeunexpectedrewards.Suchasweathey,socialstatusandpromotionprospects.
Onthecontrary,otherpeopletaketheopposingviewthatagoodnameisnothing.Foronething,nameshavelongbeensetasasymbolofaperson.What’smore,itcanhelpuscommunicataewitheachotherconveniently..Foranother,onlywithagoodnamecanournotenlargeourkonwledgeanddevelopourcharacter.
Inmypointofview,thereshouldn’tbeadistinctionbetweengoodnamesorbadnames.
Idon’tthinksomenameswillreplaceotherscompletelyorsomenameswilldespairinthenearfuture.