谁能帮我改一下这篇英语六级作文?Inrecentyears,-查字典问答网

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　　谁能帮我改一下这篇英语六级作文?Inrecentyears,thereisageneraltendencythatmoreandmorechildrenbeginlearningEnglishatanearlyage.Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeople.SomepeoplesuggestthatlearningEglishatanearl

　　谁能帮我改一下这篇英语六级作文?

　　Inrecentyears,thereisageneraltendencythatmoreandmorechildrenbeginlearningEnglishatanearlyage.Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeople.SomepeoplesuggestthatlearningEglishatanearlyageisright,others,however,holdtheoppositeopinion.

　　MyownexperiencetellsmethatchildrenshouldbeginlearningEglishatanearlyage.Thereasonsareobvious.IfachildbeginslearningEglishatanearlyage,hisEglishwouldbeverywellwhenhegrowedup,butifhebeginslearningEglishwhenheisamiddleschoolstudent,thenhislearningofEglishwouldbeharderandhardethanbefore.SomepeopleclaimthatlearningEglishatanearlyagewouldhaveabadeffectonlearningChinese,butIdont'tthinkso.Inmyopinion,themethodoflearningEglishisveryimportant,ifwehavetherightmethods,thatsituationwouldn'thappen.

　　Forallthereasonsabove,itisevidentthatchildrenshouldbeginlearningEglishatanearlyage.

　　那个~是帮我改一下（不是翻译）,具体一点,主要是语法错误什么的.

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　　Inrecentyears,thereisageneraltendencythatmoreandmorechildrenbeginlearningEnglishatanearlyage.Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleaboutthephenomenon.SomepeopleclaimthatlearningEglishatanearlyageisright,others,however,holdtheoppositeopinion

　　MyownexperiencetellsmethatchildrenshouldbeginlearningEglishatanearlyage.Thereasonsareobvious.Generallyspeaking,ifachildbeginslearningEglishatanearlyage,hisEglishwouldbebetterthanthatbeginsinlateage.SomepeoplemayclaimthatlearningEglishatanearlyagewouldhaveabadeffectonlearningChinese,butIdont'tthinkso.Inmyopinion,themethodoflearningEglishisveryimportant,ifwehavetherightmethods,thatsituationwouldn'thappen.

　　Forallthereasonsabove,itisevidentthatchildrenshouldbeginlearningEglishatanearlyage.

　　整体上不错,语法基本上没有错误.只是稍有瑕疵.

　　那个suggest,做动词用有两个常见的意思,一个是建议,后面接虚拟语气.想必你很清楚,第二个是“表明”,相当于indicate.

　　中间的陈述感觉有些许冗杂,所以冒昧地改了一下,请勿见怪.

　　希望对你有所帮助.