能不能请老师帮我改一下这篇四级作文.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicof“PM2.5”.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:Theairqualityofourlive

　　能不能请老师帮我改一下这篇四级作文.

　　Directions:

　　Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicof“PM2.5”.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:

　　Theairqualityofourlives：

　　1.城市越大,空气质量恶化越严重；

　　2.形成空气质量差的原因；

　　3.我们应该如何应对.

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　　Thereisnodenyingthatwithanincreasingnumberofsociety`seconomic,theairqualityofourliveshasbecomeamatterofconcernnowadays.

　　Aswecanseefromthefact,thebiggerthecityis,theworsetheairqualityis.Ofcourse,inouremergingcountry,thereasonsofleadingtoairpollutionaremassive.Fromthepointofmyview,onthetopofthelististhatmoreandmorecarshavebeenusedbyindividualsinthestreet.ThereistheotherpointIhavetotouchagreatnumberoffactoryhasbeenfoundedbycharacterorAdministrationinourcountry.

　　Astohowtoconfronttheproblemofairpollution,Iharbortheideathatfolkshadbettertotakebusorgoonfootforgoingtowork,ratherthantakecarsofthierself,whichisjusteasy.