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　　帮我修改英文自我介绍Goodmorning,thanksalotforgivingtheopportunitytointroducemyself.MynameisChenYang.Iam22yearsoldandcomefromHunanprovince.Therearethreemembersinmyfamily.Myparents,mysisterandI.Myfatheris

　　帮我修改英文自我介绍

　　Goodmorning,thanksalotforgivingtheopportunitytointroducemyself.

　　MynameisChenYang.Iam22yearsoldandcomefromHunanprovince.Therearethreemembersinmyfamily.Myparents,mysisterandI.MyfatherisataxidriverandmymotherlivesinthecountrynearChangsha.Theyfirmlysupportmychoiceofmedicine.MymajorisclinicalmedicineinCapitalMedicialUniversiy.Iwillgraduatewithabachelorthissummer.AndIhavespendmanymonthsforthemedicalpracticeinTianTanhospital.Inordertopursuemydream,Iworkhardinstudyandpractice.AndIpassedCET4andCET6whenIwasundergraduate.

　　Apartfromstudy,Iloveskatingandtraveling.Skatingmakemehavethefellinglikeflying.Duringvacations,Itravelalot,andbytravelingmyhorizonisbroadened,becauseIcomeacrosslotsofnewthingsandexperiencecitieswithdifferentstylesandcharacteristics.

　　Thisisme,aboywithoutmuchachievementbutwiththedesiretodoso;astudentwithoutprofoundknowledgebutwithintensethirstforit;amanwithoutbigambitionsbutwiththedreamtomaketheoceanmorebeautiful.

　　IsincerelyhopethatyoucangivemethechancetoachievetomakemydreambecometrueandIwillstudyhardinmyfurthereducation.

　　Thanksforyourattention.

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　　Goodmorning,I'mverygladtohavethisinterviewhere.Thanksalotforgivingmetheopportunity.

　　MynameisChenYang.Iam22yearsoldandfromHunanprovince.Therearethreemembersinmyfamily.Myparents,mysisterandI.Myfatherisataxidriver,andmymotherlivesinthecountrynearChangsha.Theyfirmlysupportmychoiceofmedicine.Mymajorisclinical.IwillgraduatefromCapitalMedicialUniversiy,andgetmybachelorthisJuly.Well,Ilikemymajor,andhavespendmanymonthsonthemedicalpracticeinTianTanhospital.Iworkhardinstudyandpracticeformydream.AndIpassedCET6whenIwasundergraduate.

　　Inmysparetime,Iloveskatingandtraveling.Skatingmakemehavethefellingofflying.Duringmyvacations,Itravelalot.bytravelingmyhorizonisbroadened.

　　It'smewhoisn'thavemuchachievementbuthavedesiretodo;whoisastudentwithoutprofoundknowledgebutwithintensethirstforit;amanwithoutbigambitionsbutwiththedreamtomaketheoceanmorebeautiful.

　　IsincerelyhopethatyoucangivemethechancetoachievetomakemydreambecometrueandIwillstudyhardinmyfurthereducation.

　　Thanksforyourattention.

　　前面大致改了一些,后面一段不怎么地道,不知道怎么改.而且thisintroduce重点不突出,LZ再好好斟酌一下