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  【作文修改!Thechartsdescribesthesituationsabouteducationandscienceindevelopingcountriesandindustralizedcountries.In1980,theaverageyearsofschoolindevelopingcountrieswasmorethan2yearscomparedwithmorethan8yearsinind】

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  Thechartsdescribesthesituationsabouteducationandscienceindevelopingcountriesandindustralizedcountries.

  In1980,theaverageyearsofschoolindevelopingcountrieswasmorethan2yearscomparedwithmorethan8yearsinindustralizedcountries.

  In1990,onaveragepeopleindevelopingcountriesspendmorethan3yearsinschool.Thenumberwasincreased.However,itwasincreasedhigherinindustralizedcountries.2yearslongerwasfoundin1990thanthatof1980.

  Accordingly,scientistsandtechniciansinindustralizedcountriesweremorethandevelopingcountries.In1980,10personsin1000peoplewerescientistsandtechiciansinlatter.Thenumberinindustralizedcountrieswas4timesasmuchasthatindevelopingcountries.After10years,thedifferencewasmuchbigger.Therateindevelopingcountrieswas1.5%.Whereas,morethan7%populationcouldbefoundinindustralizedcountries.

  Themoneythatwasputintoresearchanddevelopmentwasincreasedfrom$15obillionin1980to$350billionin1990inindustralizedcountries.However,thecapitalwasreducedindevelopingcountriesfrom$50billionto$25billion.

  Overall,differenceineducationandsciencecouldbefoundbetweenindustralizedcountriesanddevelopingcountries.Andthegapwasgreaterafter10years.

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2020-08-2121:47
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  第一段charts和describes不能同时用啊……一个是复数一个是单三

  第二段……我没看明白……

  第三段第二句不能用“numberwasincreased”应该去掉was吧

  第三句再去掉一个was……

  第四句……我只能领悟意思……这个说法真心别扭……

  第四段第一句形容人数多要不要用thenumberofblablaislarger

  第三句number……asmuchas……可数不应该用much吧

  最后一段用differences好一点吧

  应该还有好多细细碎碎的大小毛病没改出来……是我英语水平的问题么……我总有一种这文章直接用了百度翻译的错觉……

2020-08-21 21:51:27
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