【请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文（语法、用词或者其他）万分感谢RecreationalActivitiesNowadays,differentkindsofrecreationalactivitiesaroundourlife.Forexample,watchingTV,singing,dancing,playingchess,】

　　请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文（语法、用词或者其他）万分感谢

　　RecreationalActivities

　　Nowadays,differentkindsofrecreationalactivitiesaroundourlife.Forexample,watchingTV,singing,dancing,playingchess,traveling,surfingontheInternetandsoon.

　　Therearemanyrecreationalactivitiesinourlifeanditcanmakeussohappy.Peoplewhoalwaysinworkcantakepartinrecreationalactivitiestorelaxtheirselfandpeoplewhostayathomeallalongcantakepartinittoenrichtheirlife.Buteverycoinhastwosides,recreationalactivitiesisnoexceptionandinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,thestudentswhotakepartinmanyrecreationalactivitiesmayeffecttheirstudy.Andinaddition,manypeoplecan'tlimitthetimesinplayanditwillreducethetimesofrest.

　　Formypart,weshouldn'twork、studyorstayathomealltheway,wemusttakepartinrecreationalactivitiestomakeourbodyrelax,forexample,wecaninviteourfriendstotravelonweekend,Ithinkitisveryinteresting.Buteverythingshouldn'tdoexcessively,wemuststudytolimittheplaytimes.Inaword,weshouldadmittheadvantagesofrecreationalactivitiesandalsoacceptthedisadvantages.