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　　【拜托各位高手来帮我看看语法对不对!原文如下：SaveTheWater——OurDutyLadiesandgentlemen:Longlongago,therewasaspecialplanet.Andithadabeautifulname,itwascalledtheEarth.TheEarthisa“BlueDiamond”inuniverse】

　　拜托各位高手来帮我看看语法对不对!

　　原文如下：

　　SaveTheWater——OurDuty

　　Ladiesandgentlemen:

　　Longlongago,therewasaspecialplanet.Andithadabeautifulname,itwascalledtheEarth.

　　TheEarthisa“BlueDiamond”inuniversebecausewaterhascovered75%ofEarth.Butthereisonly2.5%isfreshwater.Theworseisthatwecanonlyuselessthan1%ofthem!Thewaterusedtobeabundant,buttheyarescarcenow!Icanhardlybelievethat!Whathavepeopledonetothem?

　　Waterisoneofthemostimportantthingstothehumansociety.Weusewatertowashourclothes.Weusewatertohaveashower.Wecanonlyliveaboutthreedayswithoutwater.Buttherearestillsomepeoplewhodon’tknowtheimportanceofwaterandtheyalwayswastewaterinmanyways.Forexample,theywashvegetablesorfruitunderarunningtap.Thiswastesalotofwater!Andnowjustthinkoverthisquestion:Ifyouseeatapdripping,willyouturnitoffatonce?

　　InNanhui,wedischargetheharmfulindustrywaterintorivers.Thispollutesthedrinkingwaterseriously!

　　Wateristhesourceofthelife,thebloodoftheindustrialandthekeyoftheagriculture.Notonlythepeoplebutalsotheanimalsneedwatertosurvive.Sowemuststoppollutingthewater.Wemusttakeactionstomaketherivers,lakes,streamsandtheseasbecomepure,too!Andthemostimportantisthatwemustn’twastewateranylonger,weshouldtryourbesttosaveit!

　　Buthowcanwesavewater?Icangivesomesuggestions.First,weshouldturnoffthetaptightlyafterusingthewater.Andalsowecanusetherice－washedwatertomopthefloor.Allinall,therearesomanywaystosavewater.Wecanchooseanyone.Itisnotdifficult.Everybodywillbeabletodoitifhepaysalittleattentiontotheprotectionofwater.

　　Treasurewater,lovewaterandsavewaterisourduty!Let’ssavethewaterfromourselves!

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2020-08-1919:04

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　　嗨,我以前在学校也经常演讲的,写得不错,稍微改点,可惜不是Word,不能清楚标注出来,你参考以下吧,最后的部分来不及仔细看了,希望有更多人能帮助你.

　　Longlongago,therewasaspecialplanet.Ithadabeautifulname:“theEarth”.

　　TheEarthisa“BlueDiamond”inuniversebecausewaterhascovered75%onitssurface.Butonly2.5%ofthisfigureisfreshwater.Whatisevenworse,wecanonlyuselessthan1%ofit!Thewaterusedtobeabundant,andtheyarescarcenow!Icanhardlybelievethat!Whathavewedonetoit?

　　Waterisoneofthemostimportantthingsforhumanbeings.Weusewatertowashclothes.Weusewatertohaveashower.Wecanonlyliveaboutthreedayswithoutwater.However,therearestillsomepersonswhodon’tknowthesignificantofwaterandtheyalwayswastewaterinmanyways.Forexample,theywashvegetablesorfruitunderarunningtap.Howmuchwatertheywasteinthisway!Andnowjustthinkoverthisquestion:Ifyoufindatapdripping,willyouturnitoffatonce?

　　InNanhui,wedischargetheharmfulindustrywastesintorivers.Thispollutesthewaterseriously!

　　Wateristhesourceofthelife,thebloodoftheindustrialandthekeyoftheagriculture.Notonlythepeoplebutalsotheanimalsneedwatertosurvive.Sowemuststopsuchpollutions.Wehavetotakeactionstoprotectrivers,lakes,streamsandseas!Lastbutnotleast,wemustn’twastewateranylonger,weshouldtryourbesttosaveit!

　　Treasurewater,lovewaterandsavewaterisourduty!Let’stakeactionsfromeverybody!