【假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
This afternoon，when I was walking to home after school，I noticed my neighbor UncleBob lay by the roadside with his right hand on his chest．It was clear he was badly ill．Severalpasser-by came up and one of whom offered to call 120．Several minutes later，an ambulancereached，and took her to the hospital．Then I ran home and told Uncle Bob's family what hadhappened．We rushed to the hospital quick．The doctor examined him and suggested he stayedthere for a week．I hope Uncle Bob will get good soon．
