假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Angela,
I'm glad to hear the news you'll come to Hangzhou for a visit.You know,Hangzhou is a beautiful city on the east coast of China.It is said that Marco Polo,a well-known Italy traveler once visited Hangzhou,and was striking by its beautiful scenery.Hangzhou is one of the oldest cities for a long history.It was the capital of several dynasty.As the result,it has a lot of famous temples and old towers.The West Lake,with green hills on three sides or many beautiful parks around,attracts a large number of visitors at home and at abroad.I think you'll have a good time during our stay in Hangzhou.I'm looking forward to see you here soon.
Yours,
Li Hua.