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  请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误是过去式的作文来的:AxisittoBaiyunMountainWevistedtoBaiyunMountain.Inmoring,wewenttoschoolat8:00

  请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误

  是过去式的作文来的:

  AxisittoBaiyunMountain

  WevistedtoBaiyunMountain.Inmoring,wewenttoschoolat8:00a.m.OurwenttoBaiyunMountainbybus.Weoftenfelthappy.Iliketheplan.AfterwewenttoBaiyunMountain.Somearetooklphoto.Somearesinged.Someareplayedgame;Ifyouliketakephoto,youwillgotoBaiyunMountain.Thereareverygoodphotos.EveryonegotoBaiyunMountain.Youfeelisahappy.InAfernoon.Wewenttoschoolat5:00p.m.intheyuntaigarden.Wehadagoodtimes.

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2020-08-1412:36
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  看了一下,是有一点错误,我改了一下.

  AxisittoBaiyunMountain

  WevistedtoBaiyunMountain.Inmoring,wewenttoschoolat8:00a.m.WewenttoBaiyunMountainbybus.Wefelthappy.Iliketheplan.AfterwewenttoBaiyunMountain.Manyfriendaretookphoto.Someonearesinged.Someoneareplayedgame;Ifyouliketakephoto,youwillgotoBaiyunMountain.Therearemanygoodscenery.EveryonegotoBaiyunMountaincanfeelhappy.InAfernoon.Wewenttoschoolat5:00p.m.intheyuntaigarden.Wehadagoodtimes.

  oh,IlikeBaiyunMouyainverymuch.Ican'tforgetthisday.

  希望能帮助楼主,

2020-08-14 12:37:15
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