【假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处】

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．

　　修改：在错的下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

　　I wish I can be an excellent cook when I grow up because I enjoy cooking but I want to bring happiness to people who taste my food．

　　I still remember clearly that happened when I cooked for the first time．I almost had my finger cutting when I cut onions and made a mess of the kitchen．Worse still，the dish I cooked tasted so terribly that I even thought about quitting．Thanks for my mother's encouragement and patient guidance，I continued practicing cook at home whenever I had time．It was then my cooking skills improved gradually．

　　I'll try my best to learn and improve my cooking skills in order that to make your dream a reality．And I believe I can make it!