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　　【这篇文章有没有语法错误?文章如下Fourbestfriendsmetatthehospitalsincetheirwivesweregivingbirthstotheirbabies.Thenursecomesuptothefirstmanandsays,"Congratulations,yougottwins."Themansaid"Howstrange,I'mthem】

　　这篇文章有没有语法错误?文章如下

　　Fourbestfriendsmetatthehospitalsincetheirwivesweregivingbirthstotheirbabies.Thenursecomesuptothefirstmanandsays,"Congratulations,yougottwins."Themansaid"Howstrange,I'mthemanagerofMinnesotaTwins."Afterawhilethenursecomesuptothesecondmanandsays,"Congratulations,yougottriplets."Manwaslike"Hmmm,strangeIworkedasadirectorforthe"3musketeers."Finally,thenursecomesuptothethirdmanandsays

　　"Congratulations,yougottwinsx2."Manishappyandsays,"Ironic,Iworkforthehotel"4Seasons."Allthreeofthemarehappyuntiltheyseetheirlastbuddyjumpingallovertheplace,cursingGodandbanginghisheadonthewall.Theyaskedhimwhat'swrongandheanswered,"What'swrong?Iworkfor7up"!

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2020-08-1212:49

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宋英豪

　　也很遗憾告诉你有语法错误.

　　首先,这篇文章是叙述过去的事情,除了对话里的内容,其他均要用过去时态的.所以修改如下：

　　Fourbestfriendsmetatthehospitalsince（用when比较合适点）theirwivesweregivingbirthstotheirbabies.Thenursecomes（came）uptothefirstmanandsays（said）,"Congratulations,yougottwins."Themansaid"Howstrange,（用感叹号啦~）I'mthemanagerofMinnesotaTwins."Afterawhilethenursecomes（came）uptothesecondmanandsays（said）,"Congratulations,yougottriplets."Manwaslike"Hmmm,strangeIworkedasadirectorforthe"3musketeers."Finally,thenursecomes(came)uptothethirdmanandsays(said)

　　"Congratulations,yougottwinsx2."Manis(was)happyandsays(said),"Ironic,Iworkforthehotel"4Seasons."Allthreeofthemare(were)happyuntiltheysee(saw)theirlastbuddyjumpingallovertheplace,cursingGodandbanginghisheadonthewall.Theyaskedhimwhat'swrong(whatwaswrong/whathadhappened)andheanswered,"What'swrong?Iworkfor7up"!