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　　【求改英语作文OnlineShoppingRecentdays,onlineshoppingismoreandmorepopulation,ithasalotofadvantages,butiteitherexistmostdrawbacks.Onlineshoppingisunlimited,youcanbuyeverythingwhichofferedbytheinternetnomatterwha】

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　　OnlineShopping

　　Recentdays,onlineshoppingismoreandmorepopulation,ithasalotofadvantages,butiteitherexistmostdrawbacks.

　　Onlineshoppingisunlimited,youcanbuyeverythingwhichofferedbytheinternetnomatterwhatweatheritis,whereveryouare,andwhattimeyoutake.There'snodoubtthatonlineshoppingbringbigconvenienttopeople.Buteverycoinhastwosides,whenyoushoppingonlineyoujustcanseesomepictureofproducts,youcan'ttouchit,can'tsmellit,can'tevendoanythingaboutit.Then,whatmakesyoubelievetheseproductshashighquality?

　　Inmyopinion,Ithinkshoppingonlineisgoodforus,butsomespecificthingsyou'dbetterbuyitinarealstore.

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　　OnlineShopping

　　Recentdays,onlineshoppingismoreandmore1popular,ithasalotofadvantages,butit2also3existsmostdrawbacks.

　　Onlineshoppingisunlimited,youcanbuyeverything4thatofferedbytheinternetnomatterwhatweatheritis,whereveryouare,5orwhattimeyoutake.There'snodoubtthatonlineshopping6bringsbig7conveniencetopeople.Buteverycoinhastwosides,whenyou8doshoppingonlineyoujustcanseesome9picturesofproducts,youcan'ttouchit,can'tsmellit,can'tevendoanythingaboutit.Then,whatmakesyoubelievetheseproducts11havehighquality?

　　Inmyopinion,Ithinkshoppingonlineisgoodforus,but12forsomespecificthingsyou'dbetterbuyinarealstore.

　　在这个上没有办法做标记,我用了数字来代替.一共有12处错误.其中的语法错误我改了,关于用词上的问题,你再想想了.