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　　【这是我写的英语读后感请各位大师帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误ReadingafterTheWonderfulWizardofOzTherewasagirlcalledDorothyandsheisalovelygirlwithlongredhair.Becauseofacyclone,shestartedherinteresting】

　　这是我写的英语读后感请各位大师帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误

　　ReadingafterTheWonderfulWizardofOz

　　TherewasagirlcalledDorothyandsheisalovelygirlwithlongredhair.Becauseofacyclone,shestartedherinterestingadventureswithherdogToto.Shemadefriendswithatinman,ascarecrowandalion.Herfriendshaddifferentweakpoints.Thelionisacoward,thescarecrowisnotcleverandthetinmanhadnoheart.ButDorothyhelpedthemandatlast,theygoteverythingtheywant.Thestoryisexciting,andIlikeDorothybest.Becausesheisbrave.Shewasnotafraidofthelion.Thoughthelionismuchbiggerandstrongerthanher.Ithinksheisalsokind.Shewaskindtoeveryonearoundher,especiallyherfriends.That’sthereasonwhytheycangetwhattheywantatlast.Alloftheirdreamscametrueandtheywereveryhappy.TheytriedtheirbesttohelpeachotherinthewaytotheEmeraldCity.It’sahappyendingandIthinkDorothyandherfriendwillneverforgettheexperiences.SodoI.

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　　ThoughtsafterreadingTheWonderfulWizardof

　　TherewasagirlcalledDorothy.shewasalovelygirlwithlongredhair.Becauseofacyclone,shestartedherinterestingadventureswithherdogToto.Shemadefriendswithatinman,ascarecrowandalion.Herfriendshaddifferentweakpoints.Thelionisacoward,thescarecrowisnotcleverandthetinmanhadnoheart.ButDorothyhelpedthemandatlast,theygoteverythingtheywant.Thestoryisexciting,andIenjoyeditverymuch,especiallyforDorothybest.Becauseshesobravethatshewasnotafraidofthelion,thoughthelionwasmuchbiggerandstrongerthanher.Ithinksheisalsokind.Shewaskindtoeveryonearoundher,especiallyherfriends.That’sthereasonwhytheycangetwhattheyreallywantedatlast.Alltheirdreamscametrueatlast.It'sahappyending.Theprogressisalsoimpressedmealot.TheytriedtheirbesttohelpeachotherinthewaytotheEmeraldCity.Thankstothefinalreault,inmyownpointofview,Dorothyandherfriendwouldneverforgettheexperiences.SowillI.

　　很辛苦,注:叙事应用过去时,评论（中肯）应用现在的时态.还有多用复句和好的词组,上下文注意衔接,我也只能改成这样.很喜欢你的概括部分,言简意赅.