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　　WhenIwasinelementaryschool,Ididbadlyinatest.SoIfeltverydisappointed.Iapersonsatintheroomcryanddidn'ttalktoanyone.Mymothercomfortedintheoutside,butIstillfeltverysad.Afewhourslater,IstoppedcryingandIunderstoodthatitisnousecryingyesterday.SoIwenttothelivingroomandchattedwithmymotherforawhile.AndthenIwenttothemovies,readbooksanddidsportswithmyfriends.Finally,Ifeltmuchbetter.

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2020-08-1007:23

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范晓峰

　　1、首先elementary改为primary要好一些；2、Iapersonsatintheroomcryanddidn'ttalktoanyone.你这是典型的中文式英语,改为Iwascryingintheroomanddidn'ttalktoanyone.3、comforted后要有宾语,...