DearSir/Madam,

　　IwouldliketopresentmyplansaftermyEnglishlessonsarecompletedintheUSA.Beforethis,perhapsIshouldexplainwhyIdidnotpickanyEnglishtrainingprogramsinChina.

　　IamworkingintheITindustryandeveryday,ImustdealwithalotofmaterialinEnglish.Manytechnicaltermsaredifficulttounderstand.CaliforniaisknownastheMecca（众人渴望去的地方、圣地的意思）oftheITindustry.IamsurethatbylivingthereandlearningEnglishatthesametime,thiswillbehighlyeffectiveformetoimprovenotonlymyfluencyinEnglish,butalsomyabilitytocomprehenddifficulttechnicalmaterialinEnglish.Importantly,IshallalsobeexposedtotheAmericanculturefirsthand.

　　【上文大概意思：

　　在提交归国计划前,我想先解释一下为何我不在国内学习英文.我在IT行业工作,常要应付英文材料,尤其技术专词比较难懂.加洲被誉为IT圣地,在当地居住和学习英文,我认为能很快促进对技术专词的理解,直接和美国文化接触会让我流利地活用英语.】

　　OnceIfinishmyEnglishprogram,IwillbeinamuchbetterpositiontolandajobinalargercompanybackinChina.Inaddition,bothforeignmulti-nationalsaswellasChinesecompaniesplanningtoinvestoverseascouldbeaprospectiveemployerforme.InChina,thereisagreatshortageofITprofessionalswhoaregoodinEnglishandwhohavesomeexposuretoforeigncultures.ThisisbecausemostChinesecompanieswanttotacklebusinessopportunitiesoverseas.Forthosewhowillnotinvestoverseas,theyplantoestablishorexpandtheirpresenceontheInternet.Forthesereasons,aftermyreturntoChina,Ishallconcentrateonseekingahigherpayingjobinacompanywithastrongoverseasexposure.Withdiligenceandbyworkingsmartly,Ibelievemyprospectsofbeingpromotedtoamanagerialpositionwillbegreatlyenhanced.IhopethentoenrollinanexecutiveMBAprograminShanghaiorBeijing.Chinawillbegrowingstronglyformanymoreyearsandwiththeaboveplan,IhopetoparticipateinthisgrowthinChina.

　　【归国后,我在大公司寻找工作的机会应提高不少.外企和许多想走出去的中国公司都适合我.在中国英文好、有外国文化知识的IT专业人士很走俏,主要原因是很多中国公司都希望做海外生意,就算它们不投资海外,也要把电子商务办好.为此,归国后,我会强调找一份工资较高、有较高对外内涵的工作.通过勤奋努力,我相信公司会提拔我到管理层.随后我会考虑在北京或上海就读（执行）或高级工商管理硕士课程.中国还有很长一段高增长的时期,我愿在此做些贡献.】

　　Thankyouforyourattention.

　　谢谢你的关注.

　　Yoursrespectfully,

　　XYZ

　　我尽量用简单的语句来表达内容,如果你能在一些地方用你自己的写法稍作修改,这会更好.主要理由是你计划去学英文,如果你目前的水平已经很好,那VO可能问你为何选一个程度较低的英文课程.

　　祝你好运,如果去得成的话,祝你旅途愉快!