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  【假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个】

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

  删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.

  修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

  One day,on my way home after school,I found out a bag lying on the road,I picked it up.There was many money and a business card in the bag.From the card I know something about an owner,including her phone number.I realized I could get in touch the owner.So I called the owner,telling her about the matter.Then I waited at the bus stop.It was not long after the owner arrived,and I gave the bag to her.So exciting and thankful to me was the owner that she took out some money to reward me,and I politely refused it.Then I walked back home,felt very happy and pride.

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2020-08-0822:29
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刘维弋

  Oneday,onmywayhomeafterschool,Ifoundoutabaglyingontheroad,Ipickeditup.Therewasmanymoneyandabusinesscardinthebag.FromthecardIknowsomethingaboutanowner,includingherphonenumber.IrealizedIcouldgetintouch∧theowner.SoIcalledtheowner,tellingheraboutthematter.ThenIwaitedatthebusstop.Itwasnotlongaftertheownerarrived,andIgavethebagtoher.Soexcitingandthankfultomewastheownerthatshetookoutsomemoneytorewardme,andIpolitelyrefusedit.ThenIwalkedbackhome,feltveryhappyandpride.

  详

  1.去掉out;考查动词,find意为"找到、发现",是及物动词,后面可以直接跟宾语,findout意为"找出、查明",多指通过调查、寻问、研究之后"搞清楚、弄明白".

  2.many改为much;考查近义词辨析,many修饰可数名词复数形式,much修饰不可数名词,money是不可数名词,故用much.

  3.know改为knew;考查动词的时态,本文讲述的过去发生的事情,故用一般过去式.

  4.an改为the;考查冠词,此处用定冠词the特指上文提到的thebag的主人.

  5.touch后面加with;考查介词,keepintouchwith是固定短语,意为"与…保持联系".

  6.after改为before;考查介词,notlongbefore意为"不久",notlongafter意为"不久以后",分析句意为"不久失主就到了",故用before.

  7.exciting改为excited;考查分词作形容词,现在分词做形容词修饰物,过去分词做形容词修饰人,此处主语是theowner,故用过去分词形式.

  8.and改为but;考查连词,结合上下文分析可知前后为转折关系,故用but.

  9.felt改为feeling;考查分词作状语,主语I与动词feel是主谓关系,故用现在分词形式伴随状语.

  10.pride改为proud;考查形容词,此处用形容词形式与happy并列做feel的表语.

2020-08-08 22:30:10
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