【■■■帮忙把这封英语email中的oralenglish挑出来■■■新人,给某领导的第一封邮件,他要求我把里面包含的口语部分改掉,我尝试改掉一部分了,为求保险,当然,有语法错误之类的也可以说,但主】

　　■■■帮忙把这封英语email中的oralenglish挑出来■■■

　　新人,给某领导的第一封邮件,他要求我把里面包含的口语部分改掉,我尝试改掉一部分了,为求保险,当然,有语法错误之类的也可以说,但主要是前者.

　　I’mwritingthisemailtofeedbacksomethingaboutwhatI’veheardfromyouandalsosomethingaboutwhatI’vethoughtthesetwodays.

　　First,IshouldsaythatI’msogratefulforthegoodmessagefromyourcompanyonWednesdaymorning.Youknow,thisisreallyawonderfullopportunitytome.Thankyouverymuch.IguaranteethatIwillgive100%effortonthepraticaltraininginthecomingsummervacation.

　　OK,aboutwhatwe’vetalkedonWednesday,May28.Well,tobefrankwithyou,IhaverecalledmanyatimewhenIwasback,then,I’mpuzzled,that’llmaybeI’mnotsoconfidenttopassyourtrainingorsomethingothersthatunknown.Butpleasegivemesometimetoadapttoyoursystem(ifIcan’t,inthebeginning),I’llcarefullyhandleitinashorttime.Justtrustme.Ofcourse,ifIstillhavesomeunsolvableproblems,Iwilltellyouatthefristtime.(certainlyImayfindmyclassmatesforadviceifI’matNJUST)

　　Asfortheexpectationtothesummerintern,well,IthinkIcanfarehardandyetsucceedwell.I’llnotbetremblingforthishardchallengement.Somaybeit’llbeinterestingasitisfancyinthebeginning,butI’vealreadybeenawareofitsdifficultyinthelongway,therefor,don’tbeworriedaboutmydurative.(yousaidthat’smyweakpoint)Inconclusion,IexpertthatIwiillgetsomethinguseful(themorethebetter)duringtheintern,bothinknowledgefromTSRorinmindfromHR.Torealizethis,I’lltrymybest.

　　MettlerToledoisreallynice,managerchenconductedusroundthecompanyasaguidethatday,andallIhadseenimpressedmedeeply.Ihadevenimaginedmylifethereinthefuture.Justnow,I’vediscussedthejobwithmyparents,asawhole,theysupportmeandrespectmywishes.Iwillhaveatalkwiththebrothersandsisters(whocamewithmethatday)somedaytoworkoutmyconclution.Youknow,I’mpositiveonthecase.

　　Pleaseforgivemymuddledthoughts(ifthereare)inthisemail.IfI’veforgottensomethingimportantthatImusttellyou,pleasewriteinyourreply.I’llmakeitcompleteassoonaspossible.Bytheway,pleasetellmeyourfavouriteformattowhichI'llobeytowritemysecondemail.

　　Pleasepassmybestwishe