雅思作文求打分和修改topic：Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstancesportormusic,andothersarenot.However,itissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughttobecomeagoodsportormusi

　　雅思作文求打分和修改

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　　Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstancesportormusic,andothersarenot.However,itissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughttobecomeagoodsportormusician.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

　　Nowadayseventhesmartestscientistfindsitdifficultylinkingthesuccessofsomeprofessionalindividuals,likesportsmenandmusicians,exclusivelytotheirinnateabilityorthenurturingduringgrowth.Inmyopinion,boththesefactorsaretheprerequisitesofsuccess,althoughsometimesitseemseasyforthosegiftedchildrentomastersomecomplicatedtechniques.

　　Itisgenerallybelievedthateveryoneofusisbornwithcertaingeniusthatwouldhelpfulfillhisorherfunctioninasocietyaslawyer,singerorsomeotheroccupations.Theonlymatteristhatnoteveryoneindentifiesinnateabilityatanearlyage.Unlikeothertalentssuchasabilityofcriticalthinkingorgivinganeloquentspeech,theadvantagesofsportsandmusiccanbedistinguishedatearlyphaseduetothepreferenceofpre-schooleducation,whichwilleasilydifferentiatechildrenfromtheirpeers.Andthenwithscientificandsystematictraining,thesechildrencanachieveamazingaccomplishmentinquiteashorttime.Inaddition,lotsofresearchesconductedworldwideonthissubjecthaveprovedtheargumentabove.

　　Despitethat,theexamplethatgiftedchildfailstomakeafurtherprogressisnotrare.Inchina,thereisatraditionalstoryaboutthis.Atpresent,someoldpeoplestillquoteitasaprecautiontoeducatetheiroffspringthatneverunderestimatetheimportanceofdiligentwork.

　　However,throughouttheworld,therearealargenumberofstoriesdepictingthetransformationfromanordinarypersontoagreatprofessional.Anditisundoubtedthatnurturingisalsoimportanttosucceed,becauseagoodgenemightdiscriminateyoufromthecommoncrowds,butonlyhardworkingcanhelpculminateyourcareer,especiallyincontemporarysociety,fullofseverecompetition.

　　Thusitisreallydifficulttotellwhichfactorismostcrucialtosuccess.ButIstillfirmlybelievedthatwecanmakeahitifallofusadheretoourdreamsandstriveforit,eventhoughwearenotendowe