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求大神帮忙修改这篇作文（英语）UnforgettabledayChineseNewyearinaparticularyear,myfamilyandIwentshopping.Weboughtalotofthings,suchasicecream,popcorn,oranges,milkandbread.Momgavemeboughtalotoftoys.Afterthatw
求大神帮忙修改这篇作文（英语）
Unforgettableday
ChineseNewyearinaparticularyear,myfamilyandIwentshopping.
Weboughtalotofthings,suchasicecream,popcorn,oranges,milkandbread.Momgavemeboughtalotoftoys.
Afterthatwewenttothezoo.Iseealotofanimals,funnymonkeys,lionsisterrible,verycutehamsters.
Weatelunchunderatree.Mydadtoldusalotofjokes.Veryinteresting.
Reallymemorableday
我承认写的很差劲，希望大家帮我修改下
