英文作文求检查MyfamilyalwayscelebratesontheSpringFestival,becauseonthisdayallmembersofthefamilywillhavethetime.Thecelebrationwasalitterbored,becausewehavedifferentpreferencesandage,soitwasmoredifficulttocommu

　　英文作文求检查

　　MyfamilyalwayscelebratesontheSpringFestival,becauseonthisdayallmembersofthefamilywillhavethetime.

　　Thecelebrationwasalitterbored,becausewehavedifferentpreferencesandage,soitwasmoredifficulttocommunicatewithyourelder.Mygrandparentshadboughtsomecandyanddriedfruitsandhadputitontheplatebeforewecame.Whenyouarrived,youcouldwatchTVoreatingsnacks.

　　At8:00pm,begantelevisionprogram.Atthismoment,wehadbeenwatchingTVuntilnextdayearlyinthemorning.Duringthistime,youcouldn’tsleep,thisisChina’stradition.Whenwastwelveo’clock,everyonegavenewyear’sgreetingstohiselder.MycousinsandIshotofffirecrackersafterwards.Thenwehadbeeneatingdumplings.

　　有一些连接的词语不知道用的得不得当,还有一些动词的时态什么的,求整体看看怎么样,还有没有可以改善的地方!