studyplan改错悬赏迟点再加STUDYPLANMyna-查字典问答网

来自付小宁的问题

　　studyplan改错悬赏迟点再加STUDYPLANMynameisxxx,IwasborninMar,l99x.FromxxxtoxxxIstudiedatxxxxSchool,andfromxxxtonowI'matxxxxmiddleSchool.Iamaresponsible,Friendlyandwarmheartedperson.Ihavesomanyhobbies,sucha

　　studyplan改错悬赏迟点再加

　　STUDYPLAN

　　Mynameisxxx,IwasborninMar,l99x.FromxxxtoxxxIstudiedatxxxxSchool,andfromxxxtonowI'matxxxxmiddleSchool.

　　Iamaresponsible,Friendlyandwarmheartedperson.Ihavesomanyhobbies

　　,suchasswimming,skating,playingfootball,andlisteningtomusic.Iespeciallylikelisteningtopunkmusic,suchassum41,simpleplan……Thesebandaregreat,

　　Inrecentyears,manyfriendsandclassmatesofminegotostudyabroad.OfcoursehavestudyIntheCanada.,FrommyfriendsandtheInternetIknowthatCanadaisabeautifulcountrywithsomanybeautifulsceneries.Itnotonlyhasgoodlearningenvironmentbutalsoownsanadvancededucationsystemandscience.ThismakesmeyearntostudyintheCanada.SoItoldmyfamilyaboutmyidea,theyquiteagreewithidea.Theyexpectedmetostudymoreknowledgefromabroad.IbelievethatIwillnotmakethemdisappointedthroughmyhardstudying..NowIwillentrustmyfriendtosubmitmyapplicationtotheeducationdepartmentinRichmond,BritishColumbia.

　　IfIcanstudyinCanada,Iwillplantomajorinnaturalscience.Ireallylikenaturalsciencesincewasachild.IknowthatCanada'snaturalscienceisaleadinginternationalstatus.Innaturalscience,Ipreferphysicsandpsychology.NowIamdrawingupastudyplan.MyplanistocompletemycoursesinseniorhighschoolinordertomakefurtherprogressinmyEnglishtogotomyidealuniversitytomajorinnaturalscience

　　Myparentshaveonlyoneson,IhopeIcouldrepaythemandmymotherlandwhenIfinishmystudiesIwillgobacktomycountry.ThereIwanttosharethereasonswithyou

　　Firstly,IamChinese,It'sChinatosupportmeandIshouldn'tforgetherfavor

　　.Secondly,It'smyduty.IshouldtocomebacktotakecareofmyparentsaccordingtoChinesetradition..IbelievethatatthattimeChinamusthavefullydeveloped,whichwillprovidewithmuchbiggerspaceformetoputmytalenttogooduse.

　　StudyinginCanadawillhelpmetorealizethelife'sleap.Thanksfortakingyourtimetoreadmywords.Kindlypleaseconsidermyapplicationandgiveayoungambitionsmanachancetorealizehisdream.

　　Sincerely,

　　xxx

　　DateAug30,2010

1回答

2020-07-3115:52

我要回答

提示：回答问题需要登录哦！

提交

林宁

　　Mynameisxxx,IwasborninMar,199x.FromxxxtoxxxIstudiedatxxxxSchool,andfromxxxtonowI'matxxxxmiddleSchool.

　　Iamaresponsible,friendlyandwarmheartedperson.Ihavesomanyhobbies,suchasswimming,skating,playingfootball,andlisteningtomusic.Inparticular,Ilikelisteningtopunkmusic,suchassum41,simpleplanandsoon.Ithinkthesebandsaregreat.

　　Inrecentyears,manyfriendsandclassmatesofminegotostudyabroad.SomeofthemgotoCanada.FrommyfriendsandtheInternetIknowthatCanadaisabeautifulcountrywithsomanybeautifulsceneries.Itnotonlyhasgoodlearningenvironmentbutalsoownsanadvancededucationsystemandscience.ThatmakesmeyearntostudyinCanada.SoItellmyfamilyaboutmydecision,theyquiteagreewithme.Theyexpectmetostudymoreknowledgefromabroad.IbelieveIwillnotletthemdownbecauseIwillworkhard.NowIamentrustingmyfriendtosubmitmyapplicationtotheEducationDepartmentinRichmond,BritishColumbia.

　　IfIcanstudyinCanada,Iwillmajorinnaturalscience.IreallylikenaturalsciencesinceIwasachild.IknowthatCanada'snaturalscienceisaleadinginternationalstatus.Innaturalscience,Ipreferphysicsandpsychology.NowIamdrawingupastudyplan.MyplanistocompletemycoursesinseniorhighschoolandmakefurtherprogressinEnglish,andthengotomyidealuniversitytomajorinnaturalscience.(由于句子太长,我分解了一下.)

　　Iamtheonlyonesoninmyfamily,soIhopeIcanrepaymyparentsandmymotherlandafterIfinishmystudies.Iwillgobacktomycountry,hereIwouldliketosharethereasons.

　　First,IamChinese,It'sChinathatsupportsmesoIshouldn'tforgetherfavor.Secondly,it’smydutytocomebacktotakecareofmyparentsinaccordancewithChinesetradition.IbelieveatthattimeChinamusthavefullydeveloped,whichwillprovidemewithmuchbiggerspacetoputmytalenttogooduse.

　　StudyinginCanadawillhelpmetorealizemylife'sleap.Thanksfortakingyourbusytimetoreadmywords.Pleasekindlyconsidermyapplicationandgiveayoungambitiousmanachancetorealizehisdream.

　　Sincerely,

　　xxx

　　Aug30,2010

　　这是我第二次帮你修改.我看你在网上到处发帖,叫人帮你改改,帮你的人却很少.我却很乐意帮你,希望让你得到满意.你的文章总体写得很好,水平很高,继续加油!