谁帮我做一下这个短文改错?Thereareadvangefo-查字典问答网

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　　谁帮我做一下这个短文改错?Thereareadvangeforstudentstoworkwhilestudingatschool.Oneofthemwasthattheycanearnmoney.Forthemostpart,studentsworkingtoearnmoneyfortheirownuse.Earingtheirownmoneyallowthemtospend

　　谁帮我做一下这个短文改错?

　　Thereareadvangeforstudentstoworkwhilestudingatschool.Oneofthemwasthattheycanearnmoney.Forthemostpart,studentsworkingtoearnmoneyfortheirownuse.Earingtheirownmoneyallowthemtospendonanythingasiftheyplease.Theywouldhavetoasktheirparentsformoneyorforpermissiontodothingsbythemoney.Somestudentsmayalsotosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.

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　　Thereareadvange[advantages]forstudentstoworkwhilestuding[studying]atschool.Oneofthemwas[is]thattheycanearnmoney.Forthemost[加important]part,studentsworking[work]toearnmoneyfortheirownuse.Earing[Earning]theirownmoneyallow[willallow]themtospendonanythingasif[去掉if]theyplease.Theywould[wouldnot]havetoasktheirparentsformoneyorforpermissiontodothingsby[with]themoney.Somestudentsmayalsoto[去掉to]saveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.