【这篇英语作文帮改改,Thetechnologydevelopmentrapider.Asaresultcellphonesarecheaplyandconveniencely.(请问方便的副词是不是这样写?)conveniencely)Likeitislightandearlycarry.Sotheunmbersofcellphonesincreasequick】

　　这篇英语作文帮改改,

　　Thetechnologydevelopmentrapider.Asaresultcellphonesarecheaplyandconveniencely.(请问方便的副词是不是这样写?)conveniencely)Likeitislightandearlycarry.Sotheunmbersofcellphonesincreasequickerandquicker.Speral(特别的单词是不是这样?Speral)atschool,大部分同学有了手机.

　　Cellphonesnotonlycanbeusedreceiveonline,sandmailandplaygames,butalsoitcanbekepttoughwithparent.

　　Butstudentsuausllyuseittoplaygamesandsandmail.Then,theywasmosttimetodoit.

　　Ithink,thisisnogood.wemustclosethecellphoneand专心听讲在课堂上.

　　有些句子我不会翻译...还有些语法错误,请各位帮改改,