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　　谁能帮我修改一下英文作文?是大学申请海外交换的个人陈述,说明为什么要交换本人英语写作不太好,希望好心人帮我改一下语法错误,以及所有表述不当的地方,跪谢!Thenewsofinternationalexchange

　　谁能帮我修改一下英文作文?

　　是大学申请海外交换的个人陈述,说明为什么要交换

　　本人英语写作不太好,希望好心人帮我改一下语法错误,以及所有表述不当的地方,跪谢!

　　ThenewsofinternationalexchangemakesmeexcitedbecauseIhavebeenlongingforitsincelastyear.Iwishtoseizethisopportunitytorefinemyselfandenrichmycampuslife.Ihavereasonsforapplyingfortheexchange.Themainpurposesare:

　　Toexperiencetheatmosphereofthestudyinforeigncountry.IhavelivednearTsinghuaforoversixyearsandmusthaveformedsomekindsoffixedideas.Iameagerfortotallydifferentthings,newthoughts,brandnewlifestyletorefreshmymindsothatIcanhaveabrainstorm.Gettinganopportunitytostudyabroadevenforawhileisprecioustome.Ibelievethatvariousenvironmentsmakeamanversatileandveryablewhilemonotonymakeshimimprovident.Soachancetolearnabroadisreallynecessaryforme.

　　Togainabilityofadaptingtoanewenvironment.StudyingabroadalsomeanslivinginaenvironmentIhaveneverexperienced.Theclimate,whatIeat,thepeopleIwillmeet,theirlanguageandtheirwayofliving…Allofthesewilldifferfromthepresentones.Iwillhavetochangemyhabittoadapttoit.Andthisabilityisverysignificantbecausetheentireworldischangingrapidlyinrecentyears.Onecannotadjusthimselftonewwayoflifeissuretobeleftbehindthetideofthedate.Theexchangegivesmeincentivetogainthisability.

　　Tolearnandpracticeforeignlanguageskill.Thebestwaytolearnalanguageistomakeitessentialinliving.IfindittruebecauseIhavebeeninJapanfor8yearsandthisexperiencemakemeproficientinJapanese.WheninJapanIhadtouseJapaneseineveryoccasion,otherwiseIcouldnotmakemyselfunderstood.NowInoticethateventhetopstudentsinJapanesedepartmentcanonlyspeakJapaneseinaratherstrangetone,whichmakesmerealizethatitmustbethesamewhenIspeakEnglishtonativespeakers.ThereforeIhaveagreatmotivationtopracticeEnglishinwesterncountry.

　　Totrymycompetitiveness.ThelastreasonIapplyfortheexchangeistotestmyself,asastudentinChina'stopuniversity,whetherstillexcelotherstudentsintheworld.Iwanttoidentifymypositionintheworldwidebattlefield,andIneedthisadventure!

　　IfIwinthisopportunity,Iwilldothefullest

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　　ThenewsofinternationalexchangemademeexcitedbecauseIhavebeenlongingforitsincelastyear.Iwishtoholdthisopportunitytoimprovemyselfandenrich(?)mycampuslife.Ihavemanyreasonsforapplyingthisexchange.Themainpurposesare:

　　Toexperiencetheatmosphereofthedifferentstudingsysteminaforeigncountry.IhavelivednearTsinghuaover(forabout)sixyearsandmusthaveformedsomekindoffixedideas.Iameagerforlearningtotallydifferentthings,newthoughts,brandnewlifestyletorefreshmymindsothatIcangetadapttodifferentsocieties.Gettingsuchanopportunitytostudyabroad,evenifit'sforawhilewouldbeprecioustome.Ibelievethatvariousenvironmentsmakeamanmultitalentedandverycapablewhilemonotonymakeshimimprovident.Soachancetolearnabroadisreallynecessaryforme.

　　Togainabilityofadaptingtoanewenvironment.StudyingabroadalsomeanslivinginaenvironmentIhaveneverexperienced.Theclimate,thefood,thepeopleI'llmeet,locallanguageandtheirculture...Allofthesewilldifferfromthepresentones.Iwillhavetochangemyhabittoadapttoit.Andthisabilityisverysignificantbecausetheentireworldischangingrapidlyinrecentyears.Ifonecannotadjusthimselftothenewwayoflife,willsurebeleftbehindthetideofthisdevelopment.Theexchangegivesmeincentivetogainthisability.

　　Tolearnandpracticeforeignlanguageskill.Thebestwaytolearnalanguageistomakeitessentialinliving.IfindittruebecauseIhavebeeninJapanfor8yearsandtheexperiencemademeproficientinJapanese.WhenIwasinJapanIhadtouseJapaneseineveryoccasions,otherwiseIcouldnotunderstandanything.NowInoticethateventhetopstudentsinedepartmentcanonlyspeakJapaneseinaratherstrangeaccent,whichmakesmerealizethatitmustbethesamewhenIspeakEnglishtonativespeakers.ThereforeIhaveagreatmotivationtopracticeEnglishinawesterncountry.

　　Totrymycompetitiveness(没有这个单词吧).ThelastreasonIapplyforthisexchangeistotestmyself.WhetherI,asastudentinChina'stopuniversity,stillmoreeminentcomparingotherstudentsintheworldornot.Iwanttoidentifymypositionintheworldwidebattlefield,andIneedthisadventure!

　　IfIwinthisopportunity,Iwilldomybesttoprepareinordertostudyabroadeffectivelyandmakethemostofit.Iwillnotwastethischancedefinitely.