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　　我写了一篇题目为"Christmasday"的英语60词的小作文,看看我哪里写错了!——（挑的错好又多的我会再给加悬赏的）!我的作文：ChristmasisaveryimportantWesternfestiral.AtChristmas.Peopledon'twork.Theyget

　　我写了一篇题目为"Christmasday"的英语60词的小作文,看看我哪里写错了!——

　　（挑的错好又多的我会再给加悬赏的）!

　　我的作文：ChristmasisaveryimportantWesternfestiral.AtChristmas.Peopledon'twork.TheygetreadyforChristmas.TheybuyChritmastrees.TheybuysomeChristmascardsandsomegiftsfortheirfriends.Theybuysomecolourfullights,too.TheyputuptheChristmastrees.Theygettogetherandsingsongs.SomechildrenplaywithaSantaClaus.Theyfeelveryhappy.

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2020-06-3017:40

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　　这个简单句太多.不怎么好改,似乎整个全得改playwithaSantaClaus好象不用a的吧OnDecember25theveryyear,theentireWesternworldcelebratesChristmas.ThisdaymarksthebirthofJesusChrist,whowast...